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Silence by a Dim Pyre
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 06:06:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The dim embers of the pyre are fading
The chambers can no longer behold
Joyous tunes and royals masquerading
No more stories are here to be told
Silhouettes fade with the decorative walls
As the room in entirety turns to moot
Silence now is the atmosphere that enthralls
As the shapes and confidantes follow suit
My mind is now becoming hollow
My thoughts bearing no words said
At this point my writing may follow
I'm starting to think that my muse is dead
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xHeathenx
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2015-03-26 06:06:24]
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Re: Silence by a Dim Pyre
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 07:28:27 AM AEST
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Pretty good. You do go from one extreme to the other, pretty neat though, you keep people thinking!
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Re: Silence by a Dim Pyre
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 08:50:30 AM AEST
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uh....if your muse is dead then it's writing from the other side. *plays weird spooky ghost music*
I really like.
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Re: Silence by a Dim Pyre
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 03:55:38 PM AEST
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i think perhaps it sometimes sits quietly beside you, also
looking into the flames, unseen, as muses do, this is so
beautifully penned!
hugs n' love nessa |
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