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Sometimes A Beast Within
Contributed by
waynster
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Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 03:01:52 PM in AEST
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The beast is blind
yet it knows everything I do
It reaches from the depths of me
just to get to you
Always trying to hold it back
making me go through changes each and every time
Thats when I find myself on a quest
of the highest mountain I can climb
Just wanting to evade
society as a whole
Trying to contain the beast within
by communicating alone with my soul
The pressure can be much
my brain deals with it in its own special way
Needing time to myself
on this given day
The enemy within
wants to soil you with its evil touch
It tries tearing through these fleshy walls
because it wants you all so much
Being kept in exile
a soul that sometimes turns to beast
Its so full of anger
wanting another place to feast
I am the keeper of the key
the master of this place I have deep inside
Eventually my soul will kill this beast
then all painful days will finally subside
Written on: 30 March 2015
Copyright 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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Re: Sometimes A Beast Within
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by Kimmy79 on
Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 03:53:45 PM AEST
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| Love this Wayne I can actually resonate with the words sometimes the devil comes through me in my temper..but I can tame the beast lol |
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Re: Sometimes A Beast Within
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by softerware on
Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 06:28:26 PM AEST
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This is like an undertow on a beautiful ocean. I can feel what you describe pulling at me as I read along! Knowing the power of the beast to take over, …scary!
Thank you for a chilling reminder that we are not so different from the animals as we wish to be. And best to be on guard against our inner life.
I really enjoyed this Wayne!
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Re: Sometimes A Beast Within
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by Archie on
Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 10:55:17 PM AEST
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I like the didactic nature of your poem. You teach well with your words rhythm and heart.
"I've seen that road before
Don't want to be there no more
where the spider web reaches
and my own heart deceives me"
Excerpt from "Hindsight" by A.Brown |
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Re: Sometimes A Beast Within
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st March 2015 @ 02:31:56 AM AEST
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| Awesome |
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Re: Sometimes A Beast Within
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by Pogivic on
Thursday, 2nd April 2015 @ 11:09:15 AM AEST
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| Enjoyable read. So good to know there is always a light at the end of the tunnel. |
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