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Seeking The Elements
Contributed by
blossomwriter
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Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 10:29:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Rain water, river, elements of sky
this constant flow of natural continuity
and the light is a giver and the earth feels it's warmth as it springs into being.
The force of wind strums it's hands into the dancing trees and the clouds dream up the bluest skies.
The body is just a neighbor within the elements learning the fundamentals of bird wings in flight.
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Re: Seeking The Elements
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 10:02:25 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
Michelle
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Re: Seeking The Elements
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 05:20:51 PM AEST
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very pretty:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Seeking The Elements
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 10:06:52 PM AEST
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| Love the imagery and nature in this, but I wonder if the last bit about the body is metaphorical. |
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