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Alive Again
Contributed by
blossomwriter
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Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 10:03:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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When the earth moved in libation to the skies,
her soul is as lively as the sun,
with invigorations of praise.
To dance with her is to know her life force again,
after the rain replenished her thirst.
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Re: Alive Again
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 11:06:44 PM AEST
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beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Alive Again
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by Waynster on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 01:34:03 AM AEST
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You use very lovely words, but your posts are too short. I really don't consider them poems, can't quite put my finger on a name for it as I am sure there is. Poems tell a story and are usually 4 to 10 stanzas long, or more. I really love the words you use and think you have a talent for writing, just let yourself go and stop cutting yourself short.
Wayne |
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Re: Alive Again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 11:39:36 AM AEST
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That is indeed very nice. Refreshing in some odd way. Calming.
Poetry is subjective. What one considers poetry another may not. This is your art. Write how you feel how it should be written.
Keepa writin'.
Tim
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Re: Alive Again
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 02:38:37 AM AEST
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the balance here between
the earth and the sun
the clouds rolling in on a dark day
the clear night sky by the light of the moon
and the sea
and to think in Germany on some days
80% if there energy used comes from solar
and oh those blue skies you can gaze forever into
a day
and then a sudden collection of cloud
imagine
being alive
good stuff blossomwriter!
Peace! |
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