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Underestimated
Contributed by
blossomwriter
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Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 11:18:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I take your body mind and soul, and your heart, with a grain of salt.
Though I give you credit, where credit is due, but I do not hang on every word you say.
I cannot rely on the air of illusions,
every time you cross my mind,
I wonder when the facts backfire their proof,
to find out your not telling me the truth.
One day is cloud nine, the next is rock bottom, and I'm still the observant fool I always was,
with a listening ear and a few words of reciprocation.
I suppose a good heart always deceives itself.
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Re: Underestimated
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by mniw on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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" a good heart always deceives itself "
It's like blind optimism.
Indeed true |
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Re: Underestimated
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by Waynster on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 01:27:13 AM AEST
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You know, I really liked this, very different in its own way, with a rhyming stanza in middle, but non rhyming lines before and after, I like the style and it has so much meaning! Thanks for sharing!
Wayne |
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Re: Underestimated
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by shadowdancer on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 01:56:05 AM AEST
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| Love the style and message,so sad and very true. |
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