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Love or lust by m.n.i.w
Contributed by
mniw
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Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 12:43:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your heart resides in the possession of whom you love.
Feelings of desire are overwhelming.
Lately you've been so close to sinning.
Envisioning women in different positions.
Your mission never to inflict harm on such a delicate heart with incisions of such precision.
Contact centered.
Lust or love?
Which do you hold above?
Human qualities denies the ability of achieving perfection.
But perfection is only defined by perception.
Thoughts of deception makes it hard for me to pursue the right direction.
Only thinking of what is left.
Straying from words and feelings result with disconnection.
Love or lust?
One reason for the lack of trust.
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mniw
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Re: Love or lust by m.n.i.w
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by shadowdancer on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 01:54:22 AM AEST
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| Intense. |
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Re: Love or lust by m.n.i.w
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by Invierno on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 07:34:39 AM AEST
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very cool....a deep subject that I hope you explore in more poetry. I would love to read it. I wrote a poem so many years ago I don't know when. I found a pile of handwritten poems in an old case. It was like Christmas for me. Like Robert Johnson's 29th song. lol
One line in there reminds me of this poem, or vice versa.
"Now I see sex as the monkey sees it;
Sex is sex; so do I breathe,
this is the order of things, this is pleasure
and all that is good.
I hear the whispering of a billion souls,
My DNA, a forest for their prancing...."
I like your write. Keep 'em coming!
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Re: Love or lust by m.n.i.w
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 10:43:53 AM AEST
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| Tough one. I guess it's almost always initially lust and love developes over a period of time. But the heart confirms what the eyes sought after |
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