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can you believe
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 10:17:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can you believe, its me, I'm back again
Drowning in this sea, to deep, will I sink or swim
If you could feel my grief, relief, would be a prize to win
Whatever's meant to be, will be, like a righteous sin
Who's holding on to me, go free, you can live again
I can be a memory, you'll see, when you need a freind
Can you believe, in me, when I walk away
Ask me to leave, I leave, ain't that what you say
Ask, and you, shall recieve, take it to the grave
Feelings, preceed, was I the devils slave
Can you believe, I'm me, and no one else
Can you believe, in me, and no one else
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2015-04-10 22:17:32]
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Re: can you believe
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by freckle on
Saturday, 11th April 2015 @ 01:54:29 AM AEST
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I read one of your earlier poems....I'll have to go back and comment on that as well.....before I read this poem. I thought the poem was good. A few typo's, but the poem flowed well and it worked...
Now, after reading this one....I can see how your writing has improved in the past two years, Congrats to you.
And if you ever need to talk lmk, I wanted to die earlier in the year and spent some time in the hospital. Peace. |
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