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Destitute Prostitute
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 09:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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(If this offends anybody in any way shape or form, I am truly sorry, but this is how I felt, at my lowest low I've known. I hope I never feel this way again, nor anybody else.)
I am now emotionally a destitute prostitute,
With all wisdom and being now to refute
A beaten and bludgeoned whore
One whose game with life, possesses a truly unfair score
I end up giving out my service, and I give them out for free
For at this waking moment, sorrow is my only currency
Tonight I wish to share my bed, with a woman that I own,
Just so while I bear this pain, at least I'm not alone
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xHeathenx
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Re: Destitute Prostitute
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by freckle on
Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 09:53:30 PM AEST
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I like it. I wish there was more to it.....(to the poem of course, not the emotions behind them)
If you write more about this I would love to read it. To be at a place, where you feel like that, is some pretty intense feelings. Don't hold that ***** in. It's not healthy.
Expressing yourself creatively is great. Making personal choices to treat yourself better is even greater!
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Re: Destitute Prostitute
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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Hi there
First and foremost. Should anyone judge you they will be judged by the same measure. So fear not and know this GOD LOVES you. The poem Freckle is quite correct let it flow to write its good for you. I say this with respect you have more than one talent WRITTING so write some more it will help. The poem it self very well structured easy to read yet sad. Take care and God bless and remember if you bow a knee to God you stand free before Him and amongst men. God bless. TFS
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Re: Destitute Prostitute
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by Invierno on
Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 06:29:34 AM AEST
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Terrific! This is most excellently raw, and raw is always better than polished.
Well done.
Invierno |
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Re: Destitute Prostitute
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 10th August 2015 @ 09:45:05 AM AEST
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Sparsely written but deeply emotional.
I think the poem said it all.
Terrific!
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Re: Destitute Prostitute
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:42:31 AM AEST
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great piece!!
i too have my
select few
whore poems
from a time way before!!!
i can relate totally!
keep writing
and sharing
forever!
Peace
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