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~Whispers of Spring~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 11:19:27 AM in AEST
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Its almost been a year now
since you passed away.
Ironic I always thought,
when I heard you say,
"I hope I make it till Spring",
you did then you died,
The flowers beginning to bloom
the tree's forming buds
and wildflowers placed on your grave
trumpets sound,wind blowing in the pine
the coo of the Dove near by.
Spring again, the Tetons poking their heads
across the azure sky.
Tulips of bright red dancing
bee and butterfly.
The Robins perched on the fence
hopping and singing their song
and the Dove's they are a calling
a peaceful but mournful song.
Lots of changes this past year
and we pulled out your old lawn sitting chair.
I found your old fishing poles
we strung some beads on some of the line.
In a week we will be going to visit
your grave in the sober place
where peaceful rest remains
near the foothills of the mountains.
Where the tall lofty pine sway
in crisp Idaho winds
and the Doves will gather again
to sing sitting on pine branch near your grave.
Wildflowers will be placed, maybe a word or two.
A gathering with our loved ones soon
a smile a tear, a kiss on the wind
and become one once more
with the Whispers of Spring.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2015-04-21 11:19:27]
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 01:39:30 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, Michelle, beautiful. |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 08:35:05 AM AEST
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| So awesome - a beautiful write. A loving story told with enduring words - enjoy this read, P |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 07:43:12 PM AEST
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A breathtaking tribute to your affection and the endurance of memories. The description of the surroundings is technicolor rich and so easy to visualize. I feel as if I've been there.
Truly lovely, heartfelt and immensely gratifying.
How fortunate you are to have had such a love.
softerware
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 12:08:38 AM AEST
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Once again your flows hit the spot
love this tribute,
well done..... |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by irisblue on
Friday, 24th April 2015 @ 06:38:52 PM AEST
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| beautiful and moving. |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by speedy on
Friday, 1st May 2015 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th May 2015 @ 02:49:17 PM AEST
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beautifully penned,
big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->-- |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 6th May 2015 @ 05:09:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully written my friensd. Hugs
Shari |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:24:32 PM AEST
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Michelle,
Beautifully written as always my friend. Its a loving tribute and bring you back to reality realizing that all our paths lead to the same place where we will once again be our loved ones.
Rich |
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Re: ~Whispers of Spring~
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 01:37:49 PM AEST
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Hello Michelle
What a beautiful life poem, it is sad when loved ones move on, however also a joyful moment, let me explain. We were raised to mourn a birth and celebrate death. I have compaction for your pain and celebrate your loved ones rebirth into heaven and everlasting peaceful life. This is a beautiful excretion of your love and tribute to your talent. Great write, God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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