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Three Sixes (part 1)
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Thursday, 30th April 2015 @ 11:37:17 PM in AEST
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Who cares about statistics
We're optimistic misfits
Living in this world of the dead
You see us as sadistic
Twisted devils rejects
Not giving in to God to regret
If you can wear your crucifixes
I can bare my triple sixes
And hold them high above my head
I see religion as infectious
Believers are pretentious
Brainwashed by the book they've read
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Re: Three Sixes (part 1)
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 1st May 2015 @ 12:09:03 PM AEST
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Optimistic Misfits...I love that line. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Three Sixes (part 1)
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by softerware on
Saturday, 9th May 2015 @ 11:08:43 PM AEST
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And everyone comes out into the street with a sign saying "hooray for our side!". There are rituals and symbols on both sides of your coin. Attitudes are infectious, too! Odd how we have to pick a side to be on, isn't it?
No matter what side we choose, both have pretentions, make no mistake. Thank you for reminding me that there is a place for all of us in this world, and we are still able to choose it for ourselves, but most of all, thank you for a swift reality check…no matter where we stand, or in how great a number, there is room for disagreement, and an equal space for tolerance, curiosity, grace, and humor. Your poem will not age; but you will.
Your thoughts will bear your life's experiences as does this poem. Keep them in a book, in a drawer, and in 50 years, read them again. You will see how far your talent has brought you!
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Re: Three Sixes (part 1)
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by desciple on
Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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| not what I expected, but nevertheless it was a great write, it flowed very well. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Three Sixes (part 1)
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 05:46:30 PM AEST
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| I expected more. I guess if there were no side to choose there would be no life. Well done reminding me of that. |
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