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Demons with Angles
Contributed by
AGP49
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Monday, 4th May 2015 @ 09:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dark is the night that holds all the pain
the bright stars shine no more
the wind howls through the trees
Dark is the night that holds all the pain
Brights is the day that holds all the joy
The golden sun shining bright
The trees swaying gently in the breeze
Bright is the day that holds all the joy
The demons come out at night
The Angles come out in the day
Never being able to hide
Always staying the same
Copyright ©
AGP49
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2015-05-04 21:22:46]
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Re: Demons with Angles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th May 2015 @ 05:06:02 AM AEST
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You either ruined a perfectly good poem by misspelling angels or maybe angles really do come out in the day which would be sort of weird.
Anyway, it's your poetry, do as you choose and  to YPDC.
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Re: Demons with Angles
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by Wordsmith123 on
Wednesday, 6th May 2015 @ 09:02:40 PM AEST
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Right, acute, or obtuse?
Regardless, welcome.
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Re: Demons with Angles
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 9th May 2015 @ 05:45:04 PM AEST
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great poem! I look forward to reading more from you!
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