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Untitled
Contributed by
speedy
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Sunday, 26th October 2025 @ 07:55:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Tears like raindrops falling down; landing on the golden crown. Someone loved has gone away; a guardian angel with God to stay. Our family, our friend watching from above; Light from a candle and a heart full of love. Watch over us from the sky; Pray for us Please don't cry. We will remain your family, your friend; We will meet again at the rainbow's end.
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2025-10-26 07:55:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 02:19:38 PM AEST (User
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| nice..short and succinct! |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 07:18:00 PM AEST (User
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Well crafted, Fox. I like the last three lines espcially.
Invierno |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 08:24:01 PM AEST (User
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Great write.
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 17th May 2015 @ 12:40:47 PM AEST (User
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I may never look at the ocean the same way again!
This is a clever analogy! Well done!
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 04:40:49 PM AEST (User
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i love your waves analogy of life, beautiful poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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