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Monterey Fair
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 01:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Shall we meet once again
At the Monterey Fair
It's been many years
I hope to see you there
Although much time has passed
Like a burning star from the heavens above
The vision of you
Still burns forever bright
You were so young, wild and free
Like a simple flower in bloom
Growing up at its own pace
You were just happy to be
You left me way too soon
With nothing to fill the empty void
Sometimes I swear I see your smile
There on the face of the moon
When I dream of you
I see your beautiful face
With the warm loving glow
Of a very pretty yellow rose
I shall be there tonight in the flesh
You, there in spirit
A union I shall cherish
Without regrets
There's nothing I could ever want
Anymore than this
Simply being with you once again
Is what I live for until the Lord
Reunites us together again.
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jamesstockdale
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2015-05-21 13:14:56]
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by Lydthon15 on
Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 02:56:28 PM AEST
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| This is such a sweet poem. I hope you get your meeting at the fair :) |
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd May 2015 @ 04:25:09 AM AEST
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I really like this! I too like to think the ones we've lost that have passed on can be with us. To go to a place you both shared in the past could be possible.
It also brought a lump in the ol' throat for me as I remembered someone I cared about so many freaking years ago.
Great write.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by speedy on
Friday, 22nd May 2015 @ 05:02:22 PM AEST
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Whenever you lose someone you love, a piece of them usually stays with you. What makes it bearable is knowing that one day, you'll be with them again.
It's so very true. Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 06:33:50 PM AEST
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| beautiful and touching. |
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 05:27:39 AM AEST
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just really liked this / watched the movie lost in translation the other night, i know it's on a different score, but there's a loose translation here in your words...
we all need to drop the negatives and always stay connected if we can. well done James!
Peace!
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Re: Monterey Fair
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 09:37:38 PM AEST
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very moving and truly beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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