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To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 01:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Days have passed
And memories on
Forgotten times spent
Wondering where they went
The building blocks of I
And who I have become
Have now become faded
And to this I am jaded
I can't see the colors anymore
No letters legible
But I love the tower
That they form together
To my friends I've left behind
It wasn't you
It wasn't me
It's just a nature of life
And every lost story
That I will never tell
The fact that it's so
Makes my heart swell
But I see you
On occasion
And every new story
That you are telling to the world
And so while we are now
No longer as close as we were
I'm proud of who you were
And who you have become
Copyright ©
xHeathenx
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2015-05-23 13:17:10]
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 06:51:28 PM AEST
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| this poem has much insight and wisdom, also touching the heart at the end. well done. |
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 07:16:54 PM AEST
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| Love the flow and the sentiment. 5* |
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 09:50:55 PM AEST
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this is precious, simply beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:32:13 AM AEST
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Great job! Reflective and poignant.
~Scorp |
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th August 2015 @ 07:37:44 AM AEST
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| A poem to relate to. A well-written reminder to us all. Little can break the bonds or dissolve the memories; yes, old friends are part of our 'tower' of life. Made me think of an old friend whom I have known since the age of four. I really can't believe that it is more than ten years since I have seen him. I must put that right. We'll look a little different, but it will seem as though no time at all has passed. Thanks. |
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Re: To My Friends From Once Upon a Time
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by FireStarter on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 09:02:08 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem |
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