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Sour Patch
Contributed by
voice of the silent
on
Wednesday, 27th May 2015 @ 02:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sour then sweet
When we first meet
But now it's gone
Like the silence after a song
Waiting for another taste
Wait for your return
Not wanting this time to go to waste
I've lost my sour patch
After I had grown so attached
Sour but sweet to her core
I wanted to know her more
But now we are away
In a way like the silence after a song waiting for a new verse to sing along
Where did the time go when did we grow so apart this silence is killing me I just want to scream maybe then you'll find me
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2015-05-27 02:15:02]
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Re: Sour Patch
(User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 27th May 2015 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
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| So much agony, yet promise, within the words you write. Dream lost, found, lost, yet still dreams on. Very compelling and honest write, very nice, P |
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