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The Final Pages
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 10:40:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The final pages have been turned
The last chapter has come to a bitter end
It's time to close the book on you and I
No further words need to be said
Except farewell and goodbye
The time we shared seemed so long
Filled with sorrow and pain
So hard was it all to comprehend
We need not study it
Or revisit it again
Your words cut me so deep
Like a sharp but jagged knife
Plunging further and further within
Until I gathered the strength
Built up a wall and repelled what came in
You let me know you were the only one for me
No one else would have me and that
Was your sick game
I had no backbone you proudly proclaimed
I guess you were wrong as your plans went up into flames
I'd rather go it alone, as they say
Write my own love story
Chapters and all
Than be just another fool
And fall for you
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-06-08 10:40:08]
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Re: The Final Pages
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 03:34:26 PM AEST
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This brought to mind my second former wife. We were never going to get divorced and never move to another house again. Well, that didn't quite work out as planned. D'oh!
Ex's, who needs them anyway?
Nicely done my man.
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Re: The Final Pages
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 9th June 2015 @ 08:18:13 AM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: The Final Pages
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th July 2015 @ 09:20:33 AM AEST
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beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Final Pages
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 06:04:54 PM AEST
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I like the fact that you in your poem are escaping from hurt and pain. I'm not sure what kind of music you like but here are some song lyrics by Boyz 2 Men that aptly portray your beautiful poem.
"Don't have to stay with someone that makes you cry
You'll end up killing all the love you have inside
Can't help to see the sun if you Boyz 2 Men
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