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Tried So Hard
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Tuesday, 16th June 2015 @ 09:39:11 PM in AEST
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He hardly spoke a word amidst company
Till your spark created a trail blaze
Jeers and taunts are your specialty
Especially to degrade his own certainties
I watch all the while; as if you truly know
Silence is key to this method of mine
Words will give me away so they're put aside
Rather my conscience and wit will be my guide
Alas he is my ally
Even if his flaw drew him as the villain
Provocation allowed you to catch off guard
The man whom for your sake tried so hard
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Re: Tried So Hard
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 05:58:35 PM AEST
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Sounds like your friend, based on your words of course, was trying to be a good friend and seen in the limelight of depreciation from those he looked to for company and love.
Hopefully, that ends with as few bridges burned as possible, and the ones that remained throughout, he realizes are much stronger than the ones that were burned. |
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