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Life Is A Roller Coaster
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 09:46:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What awaits you
Is simply unknown
Today a King
Tomorrow void of a throne
Life is a roller coaster
Many ups and downs
As soon as you're upright
You're turned upside down
The direction you choose
Is often a short cut
To avoid the truth
Deny what's known
Moving on, unscathed
Is the ultimate goal
Get through it all
Before it takes a heavy toll
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-06-22 21:46:06]
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Re: Life Is A Roller Coaster
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 07:25:35 AM AEST
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Very true. A lot of us have turbulent lives that toss us everywhere. It's much like a roller coaster. All we can do is hold on for dear life and pray for guidance.
Great write.
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Re: Life Is A Roller Coaster
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 07:27:25 PM AEST
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James: Lie your analogy! Those hairpin turns will throw you for a "loop" (pardon pun).
Think your 4th line was meant to end in throne instead of thrown??Unless you refer to being thrown from the roller coaster!
I try to avoid roller coasters!
Taking the trail;
of a lesser scale;
knowing to fail;
would be to derail!
Fun little comparison you've taken us on! Seat belts anyone?
Jaye |
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Re: Life Is A Roller Coaster
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by irisblue on
Wednesday, 24th June 2015 @ 09:06:52 PM AEST
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| love this james! how true it is. I read alot of meaning in this. love the last stanza. |
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Re: Life Is A Roller Coaster
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 08:18:36 AM AEST
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| exactly! |
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Re: Life Is A Roller Coaster
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th July 2015 @ 09:14:17 AM AEST
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excellent link of life to a roller coaster, i've often felt so myself,
hugs n' love nessa |
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