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The Wheel of Progress
Contributed by
Elisabeth
on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 10:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Trapping compartments
A part from engaging
Makes no sense
To a wheel of progress
That continues where it left
And it leaves no beginning
Thus completely engaging
The reader and thinker
The mover and shaker
The bender and biter
Renegade and fighter
Life is learning
Cannot be undone
And a spoke removed is
An illusion to the faithless
Who cannot see the layout
That learning is the life of a wheel
Of a whole man revolving.
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
... [
2015-06-23 10:46:39]
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Re: The Wheel of Progress
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th June 2015 @ 01:03:45 AM AEST
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So smooth and flowing. With every line an image induced.
I look forward to the rest of them.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: The Wheel of Progress
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th June 2015 @ 10:45:39 AM AEST
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This poem almost seems to me a turning wheel itself, but perhaps a mechanical one.
Superbly written.
Cheers,
Mickey |
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Re: The Wheel of Progress
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 02:12:38 PM AEST
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beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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