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Broken Angel
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Broken Angel
Upon the floor shattered pieces of porcelain lay
While a pair cerulean eyes and a Mona Lisa smile stare
From mahogany colored boards through empty space
At amber stars painted on a ceiling of white
With pieces scattered like the stars across a canvas of midnight
Haunting my dreams are the cracked rosy cheeks of a hand-painted childlike face
And her velvet wings, white as snow, now carry its spirit with such care
Up to Heaven where its little golden harp will once again play
2015
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ingeniusidiot
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2015-06-26 13:46:12]
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Re: Broken Angel
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 03:10:45 PM AEST
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awww... this is sadly sweet, and beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by irisblue on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 08:03:23 PM AEST
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brilliant, beautiful, sad.
huggs to you. |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by shelby on
Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 10:53:45 PM AEST
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I felt such sadness while reading this.You must let me know where this came from.
Love ya
huggers too
Shall |
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Re: Broken Angel
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 18th February 2019 @ 08:41:21 PM AEST
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This was brilliant.
Not to sound or come off as stupid but I/'/m not sure why this is so impressive. You seem to spit it out without great care but it reads as a finely crafted piece. You do it so well it sort of fools you.
Many here get too fancy with words and it ruins the piece. This is a marvel but oh so readable...
Truly beautiful and of course impressive! |
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