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Dead to all Those Around
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 04:50:48 AM in AEST
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I will never accept an apology,
For all that you did to me,
For all you did in my head,
You are dead,
And the delusions you believe,
Are the words that I can't unsee,
For the words you said,
You are dead,
And the hole you are making,
Is getting deeper by all your faking,
For you are in the ground,
Dead to all those around.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
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2015-06-30 04:50:48]
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Re: Dead to all Those Around
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 07:17:19 AM AEST
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| I can definitely hear the venom in your words, remind me to never get on your bad side. Your poem is well written and I can definitely relate to it in many ways. |
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Re: Dead to all Those Around
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 10:06:56 AM AEST
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it hurts to be hurt by one once trusted,
this is biting and wicked good,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dead to all Those Around
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 03:25:29 PM AEST
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Betrayal is like burning a bridge - once done, it cannot be undone. That's something I am well acquainted with. Eventually, the hurt goes away. It cannot be forgiven or forgotten, but eventually, the sting will dull.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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