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Rose's Lament
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Thursday, 2nd July 2015 @ 02:42:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Roses Lament
A gilded rose under moonbeams gaze
Sits and waits for her true loves embrace
With ever saddening eyes patience abounds so there she stays
With her petals of flaxen satin and lace
While words turn silent, heart-strings continue to play their somber tune
With only one thought flying free nothing forever more will matter
For another day is laid to rest with a gentle kiss from an evanescent moon
As her tears fall at her feet and like glass they shatter
That gilded rose lost in her dreams she sits in a daze
As true loves whisper flows like a summers wind
While the sky changes from warming hues to chilling grays
So it is this dream that enables her to carry on as upon the same breath her love she does send
Her dreams she carries soft and sweet.
As with long sighs she ponders in whole hearted bewilderment
For it is within these realms she feels complete.
Until her love is holding her heart she can never be content
So waiting for the sun she sleeps
For no one can know of her loneliness although her stem is straight her feelings are bent
And inside a cracking heart her love she keeps
As only time can end a roses lament
2015
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 2nd July 2015 @ 03:38:32 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by speedy on
Thursday, 2nd July 2015 @ 04:35:57 PM AEST
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This was a treat to read. Absolutely beautiful!
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by irisblue on
Thursday, 2nd July 2015 @ 06:13:49 PM AEST
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| exquisitely written ! beautiful and dreamy. |
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd July 2015 @ 09:23:48 PM AEST
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| Which is why roses have thorns. To deter the disingenuous hands that seek to pluck her and let her wither rather than admiring and leaving her to blossom |
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 4th July 2015 @ 03:40:25 PM AEST
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Nicely done, with great and colorful words and imagery. I also like mg's take on it as well.
May the sun come soon and offer the kind fond warmth so well deserved. :) |
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Re: Rose's Lament
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by Lydthon15 on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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| This poem is beautiful !The great use of imagery really creates a vivid picture in your mind. Thanks for sharing. |
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