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Upon My Field Of Flowers
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Monday, 6th July 2015 @ 10:33:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Upon My Field of Flowers
Under a cerulean sky there is my field of flowers.
Aromas refreshing the soul amiss bringing forth hope of a new day.
As anxious mind and fears make the heart rest uneasy.
Nourishing rains help the mind rest peacefully as fears are washed away.
With the hands of midnight reaching down, I slip inside myself.
All the while searching within the darkness praying for a new dawn.
With the understanding that guardian angels are watching and waiting among the stars.
I gather my emotions as if gathering flowers sifting through each one.
The hands of midnight reaching down keeping this weary traveler in their embrace
Praying for nights end and the birth of a new morn
As the first rays of morning fly on angels' wings warming my troubled soul
While thanking God for His glory and for Heavens grace
Closing tired eyes reminiscing of that field of flowers
And of the dew drops nestled between every petal with the arrival of the dawn
Clear and free what once was a troubled mind now takes flight upon the wind
Forgetting every trouble that time has wrought while resting upon my field of flowers
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 7th July 2015 @ 12:06:41 PM AEST
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Superb !
Nothing else need be said! |
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by irisblue on
Tuesday, 7th July 2015 @ 07:31:54 PM AEST
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| I read this and felt like I was there. beautiful imagery and just lovely! |
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by duff on
Tuesday, 7th July 2015 @ 07:45:27 PM AEST
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The imagery here is vivid and there is an elegance in your words that flows throughout your writing. It's amazing how something beautiful can take your mind elsewhere and leave all the pain behind. Well done.
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by speedy on
Wednesday, 8th July 2015 @ 11:50:10 AM AEST
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This was a pleasure to read.
Great write.
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 04:22:21 PM AEST
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Powerfully written, you have managed to create a scene in the mind's eye. That's when you know poetry like this has done it's job.
Very vivid and absorbing
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Re: Upon My Field Of Flowers
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 13th March 2019 @ 09:40:30 PM AEST
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| I read this again....beautiful....Great write! |
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