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Tomb of a Schizoid
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 03:13:39 PM in AEST
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Tomb of a Schizoid
Lying on a bed of withered roses
While flickers from candles cause shadows to waltz upon marble walls
With every minute that passes the darkness imposes
For the silence is deafening until the muted voices come to call
While evanescent thoughts give way to incoherent memory
The ticking of a clock resounds inside a pounding skull as it fills with apprehension
Like a ship on stormy swells fearing it will be lost at sea
And eyes are bloodshot from the strain of peering into the darkness
As serrated thorns puncture and the blood warms chilled skin
While petals have turned from living crimson to earthy hues of decay
The mind delves ever deeper trying to find solace within
Although the mind has become an inescapable tomb
2015
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2015-07-09 15:13:39]
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 06:23:32 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, wicked exciting!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by Randyjohnson on
Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 07:41:51 PM AEST
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| This poem is well written and very interesting. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by speedy on
Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 09:00:49 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by northernlights on
Friday, 10th July 2015 @ 10:28:27 PM AEST
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| Descriptive, powerful, effective writing! |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th July 2015 @ 11:58:33 PM AEST
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| Very powerful description. I got a real sense of what you were trying to portray. You're a good writer |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 04:14:21 PM AEST
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It makes me shiver.
Best
Fox |
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Re: Tomb of a Schizoid
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 06:37:22 PM AEST
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Sounds like childhood/'/s end to me,
Do u believe in the resurrection?
and quantum mechanics?
Just look at the complexity of butterflies,!
Wait till good friday
I did,
Loving your mind, and i think I/'/ll call you my friend named 5
Your aw and then some |
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