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Over The Moon
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randyjohnson
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Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 11:54:46 AM in AEST
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If you could've been saved, I would've been over the Moon.
But you died and you were taken far too soon.
You had to have a hysterectomy and your left leg amputated.
You were in so much pain, it was something that I truly hated.
My brother and I had to end your pain by taking you off the respirator.
If I would've had a choice, I would've rather wrestled with an alligator.
When you died, I came home and licked my wounds.
If you could've been saved, I would've been over the Moon.
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Re: Over The Moon
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 04:07:53 PM AEST
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This is incredibly powerful and real. So sorry for your loss.
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Re: Over The Moon
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by speedy on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 09:01:10 PM AEST
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I think we've all felt that way at one time or another. It never goes away, but it does get better.
Great write.
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