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Colorblind Awesome
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 04:22:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
I saw way past skin, I saw what lies within
I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
I saw depth and character, the things that truly matter
I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
People getting to know the man, and because of that, joining hands
I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
Not a confusion or a separation, but a collaboration
I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
It was a medley, a fusion
People, I have come to one conclusion
Shallow thoughts toss em
Try being colorblind, it's awesome
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2015-07-11 16:22:16]
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Fox
Super flow and a very pertinent poem
for our time.
One of my favorites from you.
It was crisp and that is GOOD!
James |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 12:25:41 AM AEST
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open up to all people no matter how they do
look, and you will will find
You will find incredible beauty you never
knew before existed.
Be aesthetically pure!
Love all your poems Beyfoxman5, because
they're awesome!
Peace! |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 01:23:54 AM AEST
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| Colorblind Kool |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 06:49:46 AM AEST
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beautifully penned, i love it!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by speedy on
Monday, 13th July 2015 @ 08:35:55 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 16th July 2015 @ 06:04:24 AM AEST
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"Shallow thoughts toss em
Try being colorblind, it's awesome"
Clever play there.
I wonder though; how long were your eyes closed? What caused them to 'open'? What did you see when they were 'closed'?
the answer to those questions would make for some good poetry, if honestly addressed.
thanks for writing this, fox. |
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Re: Colorblind Awesome
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th July 2015 @ 02:23:14 PM AEST
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Perfectly delivered. No aggression, no spite. Just the truth. You nailed it , buddy. x
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