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Utopia Ascending
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 01:15:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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When it's time to release that pressure
you know what you must do...
go to that place
that you only you know
between the two realities,
and
write and release that silent scream.
Inner visions coalesce
everything starts flowing
as you tell your tale,
emotions flow oh so slow
while you construct what you are feeling
and
you start to feel better
yes that's a fact
as you share a new story,
now you're flying high
in that place you belong
and
you start to smile
as the pressures released.
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Re: Utopia Ascending
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 02:36:09 AM AEST
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it's like a mantra, the pressure
these pressures, in our head
We want to release them
That's what we want
That's what we always wanted
Long long before we knew
What all this life was about
It's all about indecision, being
afraid to be obsolete, like we're
all to foggy most days to think concrete
bought and paid for off the shelf
all by the forces of gravity
like Tea pots
we recite a few words that might
someday stick
I like the fluid style with this one Utopia,
It's the reason we all try to be poets, I'm sure
of this.
Peace!
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Re: Utopia Ascending
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 06:58:21 AM AEST
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beautiful, graceful and inspiring!
hugs n' love nessa |
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