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Janus Run
Contributed by
duff
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Monday, 13th July 2015 @ 10:39:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ships crashed cry
Limit lips for shine
Behind sunscreens
Dirty pace the scene
Rendition a breeze
Words full of piece
Boast fluent sheets
Orchestrated beings
In composed mean
Sweat away the tears
With moon lying high
Copyright ©
duff
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2015-07-13 22:39:53]
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Re: Janus Run
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th July 2015 @ 05:47:26 PM AEST
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i love this, compact, tho so much beauty,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Janus Run
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:05:49 AM AEST
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Hello Duff.
I don't normally ask for clarification, but I see something in this that intrigues me as much as it confounds me.
Would you be kind enough to send me a message via this forum and provide me with some clarification of meaning?
i would be grateful.
Invierno |
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Re: Janus Run
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by ming on
Wednesday, 12th August 2015 @ 10:07:38 PM AEST
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| Ahh Duff! I'm jelly... |
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Re: Janus Run
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 15th September 2015 @ 10:43:30 PM AEST
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| This is pretty cool, you kept the flow of your poem til the end |
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