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Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 12:47:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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For love dies not a normal death
The eternal heart worries not
For under gentle breeze and heavy breath
Compassion and anguish both time has wrought
As sleeping eyes wander aimlessly
From within the depths of the heart rages an insatiable fire
As across vast miles like that of a boundless sea
Hands reach out and voices cry due to such desire
Until eternity ceases and ocean waves no longer caress their shores
From the recesses of an infinitesimal mind the soul is made aware of its plight
As mere mortals are shaken to deepest fathom of their cores
And midnights enduring hand strips away sight
As a calling card from a shadowed depth is sealed with a kiss
The sun no longer explodes with the essence of vitality
And nothing is left behind for a lifeless heart to miss
Bringing into focus a persons mortality
Nessa and Rich
2015
Copyright ©
ingeniusidiot
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2015-07-19 12:47:46]
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by speedy on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST
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I love this!
Great write.
Hannah B |
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:19:59 PM AEST
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| wow! this is a masterpiece! beautifully written |
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 04:24:00 AM AEST
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you are lovely to write with, and i love how it bloomed:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 06:30:11 PM AEST
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A brilliant co op. Artfully crafted. I enjoyed reading this.
Fox |
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 05:01:50 AM AEST
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| Great poem! |
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 11:21:30 AM AEST
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Good job guys!! Co-writes used to be a regular occurrence on here, but it has been awhile since I recall seeing one.
Smooth transition back and forth; you two mesh well.
Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp |
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 03:53:58 AM AEST
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As I read this, it made me think of how some think soul mates die and then meet each other again in a next life. Whether intentional or not, that's what came to mind as I read this beautifully crafted poem.
Great stuff, you two.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 09:43:28 PM AEST
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Exquisite!! Love how it all blended. You guys write so well together. I miss co-writing. well I miss writing altogether :(
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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death
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by Archie on
Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 10:40:56 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I like the style of this and the cosmic sense it gives to mortality. |
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