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I Want to Go Away
Contributed by
blknwht
on
Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 01:47:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I dont want to be here
I just want to go
Send me high into the sky
Where absolutely nobody knows
I could sit upon a cloud
And cry rain on your parade
Just like you did that day
As you threw our love away
Ill never truly understand
What happened on that day
I knew our life was tough sometimes
But I never saw it ending this way
You left me feeling worthless
All awhile youre okay
You left me here to die alone
With a cold hearted smile on your face
This isnt the woman I used to know
So mean and so unjust
Destroying our Marriage
For you, it must have been a must
Forgiving myself should be easy
At least thats what they all say
Although they dont live my life
Every night and every day
Time is my enemy
And I am my only friend
I hope youre truly happy
With how you choose for this to end
So send me high into the sky
So I can be alone
Away from all the craziness
From a place I used to call home
Copyright ©
blknwht
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2015-08-03 13:47:17]
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Re: I Want to Go Away
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by speedy on
Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 05:36:25 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: I Want to Go Away
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by mrpeanut64 on
Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 09:11:43 PM AEST
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| One day at a time. It does eventually get easier. |
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Re: I Want to Go Away
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 4th August 2015 @ 01:33:46 AM AEST
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Great write
It's called a divorce for a reason.
You now can divorce yourself from all of
the BS. and be free.
Good Luck and Peace!
James |
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Re: I Want to Go Away
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 6th August 2015 @ 11:21:27 AM AEST
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The pain is palatable. I imagine this hurt quite a bit to write, but even more so to experience. Keep writing. Getting the emotion out is better than it rotting out your insides.
Good luck.
~Scorp |
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Re: I Want to Go Away
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 11:16:25 PM AEST
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If you're not, clean your room and your house then do something special for your self. Don't be afraid to talk about it or to ask for help if you need it.
This was a very good write raw and emotive |
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