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Looking
Contributed by
Northernlights
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Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 06:56:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There are
so many beautiful things in this world!
While I am looking for you.
Innocent pictures of everyday love,seen
In the moment and treasured in tears.
If I don't stop and look,then I will miss the
Diamonds that light up an aged face,
As it twinkles with the warmth of lived in
Moments.
My heart will never stop its quest to find
You, but I am going to stop to smell
The sweet scent of every one of
Life's Roses.
Copyright ©
Northernlights
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2015-08-08 06:56:31]
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Re: Looking
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 09:23:42 AM AEST
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| Stunning...absolutely stunning! |
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Re: Looking
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 10:33:24 AM AEST
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| I can't stop reading this!!! |
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Re: Looking
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 01:45:36 PM AEST
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perfect. so very well done.
Invierno |
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Re: Looking
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 08:40:01 PM AEST
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| 👏👏👏 |
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Re: Looking
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:03:32 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful. It is always a pleasure to read your work.
I read this over and over. the last few lines are my favorite..such a great way to close this.
" My heart will never stop its quest to find
You, but I am going to stop to smell
The sweet scent of every one of
Life's Roses."
bravo. this was perfection for me....I am coming for you my dear, but just let me take my time..so much along the journey to see, so many roses to smell...I'll find you though...I promise... |
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Re: Looking
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 11:59:45 AM AEST
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truly beautiful, keep writing, :)
hugs n' love nessa |
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