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Hurt
Contributed by
darkcapricorn
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Monday, 10th August 2015 @ 04:37:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Here it comes again the thing called life
Sitting alone in my world full of strife
Demons around me how'd I end up here
In this time and this place, now without you m'dear
Screaming for rest yet never it's found
The silence is agony, a deafening sound
How can I do this how will I ever cope
Please cut me a noose, with a short piece of rope
This is the end I've been here before
The place that now I can truly adore
I've fought with these demons for a very long spell
And don't even have my soul left to sell
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2015-08-10 04:37:58]
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Re: Hurt
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 10th August 2015 @ 02:08:07 PM AEST
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| Perhaps if the soul was spent on one's self, and others in equal measure, there'd be no concern that you can't sell it, as one got one's own satisfaction already. :) |
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Re: Hurt
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 12th August 2015 @ 01:23:04 AM AEST
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I think that one of the hardest lessons in life is to love without expectation. Love yourself and others without worrying about how its supposed to be.
In any case, keep writing.
Always, Abraham |
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Re: Hurt
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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this is
Great work!!
keep writing and
sharing
forever!
peace
$tr8 $av |
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Re: Hurt
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 15th January 2021 @ 02:08:02 PM AEST
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Happy birthday. Hope you’re well.
This poem grows in strength with each stanza. |
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