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No one knows how I feel
Contributed by
Steb3544
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Feeling alone is this world is scary. The feelings that you feel and the things that you do. Make you feel like a freak or just some weird troubled kid. It's like no one can relate to what you feel. It's hard to describe what's going on in my head. I don't like to talk about it, but i dont know what to do. I'm afraid I might hurt myself. I don't want to tell you what's wrong because I feel dumb. It's like you'll never know how I feel or how it feels.
I cry a lot, and hide my feelings a lot too. No one knows I'm not okay. I put on a show everyday. It's a fake smile, if not that then it's a reason for me not being myself. I'm either sick or I'm tired. Of course they believe me. But no one see's past all those shows I put on, or those lies I tell. It's like no one cares. Till one day I'm gone, or really sick. That's the day they start to care.
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Re: No one knows how I feel
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by Ember on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:34:30 PM AEST
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| it sounds like you have a lot of pain built up...i feel for you... talk to some1 it helps |
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Re: No one knows how I feel
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:41:35 PM AEST
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You're right! No one does, because it is your experience. Here is a poem for you:
Clown
Putting on my mask
that laughs
for the day
and taking off the smile
with tears,
brooding at night
when no one can see
or hear
my sobbing heart,
the throws of anguish
from my breast,
my smile...
people laugh seeing me;
how I bring them from the cold,
but not told
how I long to hold that warmth
within my smile,
the hurt in your cheeks
from laughing,
how your sides ache.
But my ache is in my heart,
not feeling like laughing.
Putting on my mask
that laughs
for the day
and taking off the smile
with tears,
brooding at night
when no one can see
or hear
my sobbing heart,
the throws of anguish
from my breast,
my smile...
...when will it end?
published at The Awakening Review March 2003
KEEP WRITING!! Your emotions are what poetry is all about.
Chuck.
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Re: No one knows how I feel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:11:35 AM AEST
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Seems like you're a alone and your not someone is there for you. Reach out to someone and I am here to talk to you if you want. Trishabong420@
hotmail.com. aim-wtrisha1-messager |
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Re: No one knows how I feel
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:12:25 AM AEST
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Seems like you're a alone and your not someone is there for you. Reach out to someone and I am here to talk to you if you want. Trishabong420@
hotmail.com. aim-wtrisha1-messager |
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Re: No one knows how I feel
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:04:16 AM AEST
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Im sorry that things are hard on you right now. email me if you would like concretecowgirl32@hotmail.com feeling alone is the worst!!
Michelle |
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