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Crunchy Dawn
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 04:26:44 PM in AEST
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Crunchy dawn and stolen air;
beauty I would give my breath to,
crusty eyes to leave droppings
on the porch.
Pinks so pink pink is shamed , stealing
such a precious colored name;
so soft, the sun yet not awake,
rising with me in this moment.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2015-08-16 16:26:44]
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 07:33:56 PM AEST
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 17th August 2015 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST
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After I read it twice I got it.
Cool write indeed.
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 02:46:02 PM AEST
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this made me think of a sunrise. this is simply beautiful and amazing!
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by softerware on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 09:45:46 PM AEST
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What a perfect selection of words to describe a crispy dawning not yet quite born. "Pinks so pink pink is shamed." In the chill silence of the night cocooning into a butterfly, we breathe the frozen air into our souls to write another day on the black slate sky.
Crunchy dawn and stolen air..behold the night escaping before the thunder of morning!
I cannot better praise your customary eloquence.
You are always a joy to journey with!
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 03:09:14 AM AEST
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Loved the title, and the rest didn't disappoint either.
Ironically I was reading this while eating my crunchy cornflakes.
Just goes to show, words used in the right hands can really make us sit up and take notice.
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Re: Crunchy Dawn
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by Archie on
Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 03:35:02 AM AEST
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| I don't see the sunrise but your poem is great just the same. |
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