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In the dark
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Friday, 21st August 2015 @ 12:36:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Falling in reverse into the dark
feels like I've been torn apart
Your eyes, your arms falling away
but as for my sadness its here to stay
It's dark where I am, all alone
without you I don't know where to go
I'm wandering without a sense of time
there was a moment when you were mine
But, now thats gone; ripped apart
feels like I have no hope, nor heart
My memories are all I have of you
without them I wouldn't know what to do
I miss you everyday that you've been gone
I conjure up your words like a haunting song
It plays everyday I walk alone in the dark
I don't want to feel like this: torn apart
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FireStarter
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2015-08-21 00:36:09]
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Re: In the dark
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 11:34:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful, and sad expression. Great flow and attention to rhyme scheme. Not sure what it has to do with spring break...Maybe you got dumped or cheated on? I suppose it doesn't matter...Nor does the person who didn't appreciate what they had. Keep writing.
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Re: In the dark
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 02:17:32 AM AEST
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exquisite poetic perfection,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In the dark
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 12:48:40 AM AEST
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OMG!!!
This stuff is so goooood!!
i loved it!!
keep it up always
peace
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