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Let Me Live My Life
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 09:16:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Some days I exist
As a cloud in thin air
Somewhat translucent
But still there
With no sun
I stumble blinded and numb
For what is life
Without a ray of hope
Peace never seems
To set upon my soul
I cry out for help
But no one is there
Let me live my life
Create something to share
Without dreams and hope
A life is bare
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jamesstockdale
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2015-08-23 09:16:03]
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Re: Let Me Live My Life
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 10:25:59 AM AEST
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all true...but....I AM HERE. PM me any time my friend. I have some experience swimming in that same fetid pond, but discovered a cleansing hose not filled with holy water. any time bud.
Invierno |
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Re: Let Me Live My Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 11:18:36 AM AEST
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Great job expressing yourself. I can relate to this feeling at times, and I'm sure many others can too. Keep writing!
We're here.
~Scorp |
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Re: Let Me Live My Life
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 01:39:20 PM AEST
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James,
I have felt this way before and not so long ago when my dad passed. You are an amazing person and poet! with so much to give , and not to mention all the people who care about you here on ypdc! keep writing as we all love your work and kind words of wisdom.
huggs Kara aka irisblue |
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Re: Let Me Live My Life
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by Archie on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 07:39:31 PM AEST
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| I could not have said it better. You have written a great and positive piece. |
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Re: Let Me Live My Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 06:33:16 PM AEST
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beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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