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War
Contributed by
AmiasDavies
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Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 07:22:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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The world is cursed,
Everyone wishes for the worst,
For war we have a thirst,
And we cant wait to burst,
Everyone wishing that theyre first,
Its as if the world will never be nursed,
And this isnt rehearsed,
It just immersed,
One word and were all DISPERSED,
It should be reversed,
The reasons are all submersed,
Its like were all coerced,
And they say theyre versed.
One action leads to another,
One death leads the brother,
And all puppets by the cry of the mother,
Those shouts make us smother,
Which leads us souther.
Ones pain will never be forgiving,
But its for us, the living,
Were the ones who should be giving,
For there is a COST OF living,
We should be reliving,
And stop the misgiving,
And make it all thanksgiving.
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AmiasDavies
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2015-08-28 07:22:37]
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Re: War
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by softerware on
Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 11:40:34 AM AEST
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Tied my tongue reading this! Holy cow Batman..such rhyme sustained!
Like your message; like your delivery; and never knew that so many words ended with "ersed".
An entertaining sing-song to start the week!
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Re: War
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by Archie on
Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 03:37:51 PM AEST
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| This is a very positive and refreshing write. Each stanza has its own message and rhyme |
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Re: War
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 09:56:42 AM AEST
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Great poem.
I think you put more rhymes in this than there is time.
Well done indeed!
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Re: War
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 01:19:34 AM AEST
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A balance perhaps
If there was a natural state
in the balance
there would be no need for
the idea of war
For the all of everyone
caught up in any war ever recorded
or perhaps unrecorded enough
The infinitesimals have no say...
Gratitude for those who understand
this can never be said enough
Great piece!
Peace! |
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