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to eat the night
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 02:02:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the hiss
of whispers
but each
word a
silent bullet
offering
excuses
hard thoughts
are held
in lower-case
minds.
so, still
chewing,
with swallows
of dark
rain.
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ming
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2015-09-09 02:02:50]
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Re: to eat the night
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 03:41:12 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem. This is why I hate clicks. |
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Re: to eat the night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 04:12:19 AM AEST
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I find it funny, though, sometimes when the gossip is about oneself and it makes it all around the loop, back to you and has no ring of truth.
"But each word a silent bullet offering." Love that!
Thanks,
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Re: to eat the night
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 10th September 2015 @ 09:30:46 PM AEST
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A fine piece. Nice employment of space to purpose.
Invierno |
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Re: to eat the night
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 07:04:30 PM AEST
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Dam--mit! I can't get enough of your brain!
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