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Thank you for Everything:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
on
Thursday, 10th September 2015 @ 07:14:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lord when I pray
Lord when I work
Lord when I sing
let me do it with excellence.
Lord when I cry
Lord when I shout
Lord when I praise
let me do it with excellence.
Lord when I clap
Lord when I jump
Lord when I stomp
let me do it with excellence.
let me do everything with excellence.
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richard_campbell
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2015-09-10 19:14:10]
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Re: Thank you for Everything:
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 06:57:17 AM AEST
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Agreed! Well said, well wrote.
We are only as good as our word and our deeds.
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Re: Thank you for Everything:
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by Archie on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 05:48:58 PM AEST
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| Your poem reminds me of a song |
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Re: Thank you for Everything:
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by softerware on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST
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Sometimes when I read your works, I wonder if I have done my best.
Perhaps it is sufficient to have tried; even having missed the mark; even having wasted talents; even having settled for a lesser victory.
You expect so much of yourself that I am certain you achieve more than if you did not.
It is to your credit. and a call to your readers.
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Re: Thank you for Everything:
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:52:12 PM AEST
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Great work: our goal should be to do everyting unto God with skill, as you have put it here. God bless and thanks for posting,
Deidra |
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