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Forgive My Love
Contributed by
blknwht
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Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 10:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Green and Blue are our colors of love
We fit together like two Turtle Doves
Living life as if there are no rules
Making plans for the future they think we are fools
But we both know that what we feel is so right
And I know we can continue to love, because we love so tight
Deep down in our hearts we both know it is true
I want to spend my life together, with an Oh So Beautiful You
We started building a foundation of trust
As we both feel that it is just a must
Weve shared all of our secrets, from beginning to end
As we still know it makes us the best of friends
Like a Romance Novel we just love so deep
Being together is something we SHOULD keep
Neither of us has ever felt this way before
Im sure we both want this feeling to last forever more
I know one day, after a day so bright
We laid on the bed as we did every night
I spoke deeper about my sickness at hand
Erika Making you scared was NEVER my plan
You were so accepting of everything that I said
But thought we should slow down as we laid on the bed
I cant explain what went through my mind
Old feelings of rejection that I used to feel all the time
Very scared I hopped out of the bed
I had to just leave for a few minutes, is all I said
Like my Best Friend, you blocked my way
No one has ever done that for me, you kept begging me to stay
I tried to explain why I had to go
It wasnt your fault Erika, for you didnt know
I hadnt taken my meds, for the last two days
And my thought process was clouded, all in a haze
But like my Best Friend you wouldnt let me leave
You pulled everything out of the book, everything from up your sleeve
Explaining how your mom had done you in the past it did make me believe
Although I still acted selfishly, and decided to leave
You gave me two options at the time at hand
Erika, my decision was horrible, I wasnt thinking like a man
As I walked out that door I did not realize what I had lost
However I realized as the door shut, OUR Love was the cost
It didnt take me long to realize I was wrong
I didnt even make it to the car; I felt your heart beating so strong
I ran back to your door as quick as I could
Wanted to throw my arms around you as true lovers should
But it was too late, your anger I could see
Letting me back in to youwas going to be a big catastrophe
For my actions brought alive your broken past
I understand Erika its a feeling you didnt want to last
Protective, you wouldnt open the door, kept begging me to leave
I understand right then, you couldnt accept my apology, you felt deceived
It was never my intention Erika, I just wasnt thinking clear
All I truly long for Erika, is for you to be near.
Out of respect for you I decided to leave
What was going on in my mind, you wouldnt believe
For I knew I had failed you, it was never my goal
I want to love you forever, youre such a Beautiful Soul
Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, how I miss you so very much
I miss the sound of your voice; I miss the comforting feel of your touch
I miss the connection we shared, one neither of us has ever felt before
I miss kissing your whole body; Ill miss it for now, but hopefully not forever more
I miss that look in your Beautiful Blue eyes, when you would look through me so deep
I miss the comfort we shared, when we talked and we both would weep
I miss the body to body contact, when we would fall asleep
I miss lying in the bed all day, each others hearts were ours to keep
I miss your hair in my face, when you would lay on me at night
I miss waking up to your Beautiful Self; your smile is so bright
I miss lying in the bed for hours, talking about everything in site
I miss us sticking up for each other, always using all our might
I miss eating every dinner with you, even though dinner wasnt all that great (lol)
I miss running my fingers through your hair, while staring at your Beautiful face
I miss our little boat trip, for we were most definitely in a great place
I miss taking pictures of your Beautiful Soul, for your Beauty one hundred percent, makes my heart race
I miss making plans for our future, as our plans are surly air tight
I miss talking about the upcoming storms, for together we wouldnt be in fright
I miss how we loved each other, for neither of us have ever loved like that before
I miss how you allowed me love you, you alone Erika, I truly adore
Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, Im glad to have known you this short while
Surly theres another chance; you know we make each other smile
I admit I was wrong Erika, I knew it right away
If youd give our love another chance, I swear Ill always stay
We know our love is real, and never was unjust
That feeling of true love IS REAL, being together is a must!
For we both seemed to have lost, every step of every way
Together we will climb mountains! Together we will stay!
We both should view this issue, as our first big storm
And yes I know I promised, that Id never make you mourn
Forgive my love, for my one biggest mistake
Choose to walk with me hand and hand, please dont hesitate
For we will still walk together, through every upcoming storm
I can still fulfill my promise, and never make you mourn
The Best of Friends, yes... we still can be
For we both know that we set each other free!
If you can find in your Beautiful Heart, to believe I know I was wrong
If you can still believe, that to my ears YOU alone are my favorite song
Then lets come back to each other once again and live forever more
For its you Erika, and only you, that I have EVER truly adored
You are the love of my life, no matter your choice
I will always yearn to hear your Beautiful voice
I will always hope and believe, that you are safe and secure
I hope you will always love, for you Soul is so true and so pure
Green and Blue are our colors of love
We cant deny it; we fit like two Turtle Doves
Please open your heart, to all that is good
Then we can walk life together, as true lovers always should
I love you Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul
Copyright ©
blknwht
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2015-09-12 10:57:15]
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Re: Forgive My Love
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:21:22 PM AEST
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Woah, a novel of love. lol
Impressive, in it I can offer tiny bits of suggestion, like slight alterations to words for a smoother flow of the words in terms of the syllables. It's really long, so I can't go back and find any in particular right this moment.
I feel I've been where you are in this respect, with someone of my interest. For the fear of the unknown, the fear of the risk of causing pain of the heart by letting compassion slip, the fear of losing connection by difference in identity, these things can be rough.
Your issue, I have no clue, but the fear is what you should fear in this respect.
I hope the best for you. :) |
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Re: Forgive My Love
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:46:50 PM AEST
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I am reminded of lost love here; so touching and sad, but in a good way. You know the cliche "if you love someone set them free..." We'll have to see what happens, but great writing here. Pure emotion and beauty at its finest. Take care and God bless,
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Re: Forgive My Love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 07:53:06 PM AEST
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| Firstly this is an epically long poem. I think you get your point across in many ways and with lots of repetition but not quite like a song rather like a pouring of the heart. I like this somewhat about your poem. |
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Re: Forgive My Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 09:07:46 PM AEST
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beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa
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