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A Ming Thing
Contributed by
Invierno
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Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 07:36:54 PM in AEST
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My box discovered
uncovered
wanting,
collapsed of faulty structure
found stale
in view of a larger lens.
Bending now, not uncomfortably so----
I owe contortions (welcomed)
to an Arsenal and Grand stroller-
maybe Pestalozzi if I'm lucky for the memories.
Now, free of pentameter
I forgot to forget
I toss adjectives like rings at a county fair
allowing myself the luxury of saying
f off to normality.
With a blood clot- a grenade, pin pulled
to end my moment
I embrace this new found forgotten joy.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2015-09-19 19:36:54]
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Re: A Ming Thing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 09:05:32 PM AEST
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Hey Invierno, this is really, quite well written,
and a great tribute to Ming... I also love his simplicity and
the welcoming embrace of his stuff
Pestalozzi - great comparison. We learn with the heart the hands and the mind!
This reads so well, love the style!
Peace!
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Re: A Ming Thing
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by ming on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 10:53:41 PM AEST
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| Abstract is where it's at. ;) |
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Re: A Ming Thing
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by softerware on
Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 08:54:29 AM AEST
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There is a sharp edged freedom in knowing our time is numbered.
You share 'his new found forgotten joy" with those who by virtue of a ticking bomb, see life "In view of a larger lens".
For the first time, you can live for your own sake.
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