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Truly Wonderful
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are Truly Wonderful
and im Not sure when i realized
that i loved you
Maybe it was the Firsttime i really
saw you in your Words
the words of encouragement that
always helped me through the moments
when i felt so vulnerable
but do you See me as i now see you?
can you even see me at all
you are a Tainted Window
because i know little about you
and its all about the way we see through
the Eyes of others
you are a what you are
and i LOVE you for that.
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fallensilence
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2003-05-29 02:05:00]
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Re: Truly Wonderful
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:01:34 AM AEST
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| the use of capital letters is really effective and i love the honest feel to this write. i'd love to know who its about! keep them coming David, they're getting better and better. Kate x |
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