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a dark noisy deluge
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 01:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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unfolding
like crumpled
paper
abstraction
defining
the hum/buzz
grey line
a trail
of decaying
flowers
that calls
to the space
of stillness
under
the mask.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2015-09-21 13:48:56]
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by softerware on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 07:07:34 PM AEST
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This needs no explanation. Your write sells itself in its pure form. Conjuring images, like preview to a movie in staccato tempo. Never finishing a thought. It is a dance of vaguely connected sights and sound. No bridges to cross here. No beliefs to suspend.
Your readers will make of it what they choose.
But you are still holding the baton!
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by softerware on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 07:07:38 PM AEST
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This needs no explanation. Your write sells itself in its pure form. Conjuring images, like preview to a movie in staccato tempo. Never finishing a thought. It is a dance of vaguely connected sights and sound. No bridges to cross here. No beliefs to suspend.
Your readers will make of it what they choose.
But you are still holding the baton!
softerware |
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2015 @ 09:13:13 PM AEST
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Ming, you continue to set a bar.
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by karoody on
Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 01:40:27 PM AEST
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| Your poetry has this unique flow. I am enjoying reading them. --kara |
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 07:49:16 PM AEST
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| Sorry, softerware said this needs no explantion. It does for me. Could you please tell us all the thought pattern to your poem; it is most intriguing. |
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Re: a dark noisy deluge
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by ming on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 10:41:50 PM AEST
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AnotherRed,
I was told it was not allowed to chat here. Once. I sent you a pm.
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