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letting go
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 07:09:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breathe in and out
count to ten
Let all the pain out
thats trapped within
Close your eyes
and count back
From ten to one
dont lose track
Ten, nine, eight,
seven, six, five
Take a deep breath,
keep your mind alive
Four, three, two
your almost down to one
Take a deep breath
your almost done
The only number left
Is loneliest of all
Number one,
standing proud and tall
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Re: letting go
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 10:38:29 PM AEST
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I actually breathed this with you!
Your closing 4 lines say it all:
"The only number left is loneliest of all, number one, standing proud and tall."
Alone I think doesn't have to be lonely--compared to some company I have known, "alone" sounds like a vacation!!
Keep standing tall; it makes it easier for the world to find you. Put yourself out there, and be at your gracious best when someone gets curious enough to knock. You have much to offer; don't let anyone rush you.
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Re: letting go
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 07:17:35 PM AEST
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| Grabbed me by the balls. Thank you. |
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