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Salt in my wounds
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 03:35:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Hearts adrift
and lost at sea
pour salt in my wounds
and let me be
Never again will I be
this far gone
Where my stitches are open
i'm coming undone
Every step I make
the salt moves closer
My heart and mind
fell for the poser
Can't believe I lost so deeply,
lost every part of me
for someone who poured salt
constantly
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Re: Salt in my wounds
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by softerware on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 08:11:33 AM AEST
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"Hearts adrift and lost at sea" No better way to define the vast emptiness that surrounds us when we have lost love.
When sarcasm replaces melancholy, we are beginning to heal.
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Re: Salt in my wounds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 06:10:32 PM AEST
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Freshwater tides are coming your way. Trust me. x
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Re: Salt in my wounds
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 26th September 2015 @ 12:11:30 PM AEST
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This stings to read. So VERY well done!
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Re: Salt in my wounds
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by thomasu01 on
Tuesday, 10th November 2015 @ 04:44:42 AM AEST
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This is Great I feel the parting pain.
And I ' m a man. |
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