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Space and Time
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When we're children,
Time is a burdensome constraint;
In our teens we wish to hold it,
A hero with a brush of mysterious paint
In our adulthood?
This is something... peculiar; strange
What we always have, and yet want ever more
A commodity and currency we cannot seem to claim
Whilst space is a language,
One we wish to learn and thus seek;
But its tongue is as primitive as it is complex,
Making it one we cannot seem to speak
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2015-09-28 06:30:00]
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Re: Space and Time
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by irisblue on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 11:03:47 PM AEST
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| brilliant write! You touch on life and different stages that I could really relate to and the last stanza is much more deep to me in a cosmic way. Love this! |
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