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Don’t Know Why
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 4th October 2015 @ 01:36:17 AM in AEST
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I dont know why I feel this way,
I love the night as well as day
the brilliant sun,
the cold bright moon;
midnight stars
and shadowed noon.
seasons, in their lovely clime,
mountain ranges capped in mist
clouds parading over time,
vistas I cannot resist.
I dont know why I feel this way,
the sea in me is here to stay
while desert winds were my first breath,
Ill love it all till my last rest.
even if it goes away,
Im blessed with each and every day
I just hope that it will stay,
so I can always feel this way.
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spike
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2015-10-04 01:36:17]
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Re: Don’t Know Why
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th October 2015 @ 03:07:22 AM AEST
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I do too
not know why
I share your joy
yet I do
And it is good
beyond good
It's crazy cool
on a cold bed of nails
through the smoke
behind the veils
Love this poem senior Spike
as well as the photo
especially when I feel tired
everybody hurts, things go wrong
and days are long
But then there's still energy somehow
left for some joy
that says don't stop believing in tomorrow
Thank you for capturing that!
Peace! |
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Re: Don’t Know Why
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2015 @ 03:09:56 AM AEST
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| I think, with our limited knowledge, we have to accept without understanding, but we'll forever be striving to do so. We're all rooted to this Earth, and my roots will never be uprooted. Uplifting, quality poem, and the photo is great too. I reckon he is shouting, 'Yes!' |
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Re: Don’t Know Why
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 13th October 2015 @ 10:40:58 PM AEST
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It doesnt get any better than this piece!!
I loved it!!
Keep writing and sharing always!!
Peace
Str8 Sav |
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Re: Don’t Know Why
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by thomasu01 on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 06:49:07 AM AEST
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Great and simple with rhyme, a little story telling . Flows you into a good feeling.
Well done. |
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