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40 Yard Stare
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
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Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 02:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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40 Yard Stare
orig (906) poetry
10/15
By: D.L.Brown
aka
$tr8 $av
Wikkid Rich
Wires crossed
all wrong
bulbs burnt out
blown fuses
burnt smell in
the air
Da#n Heart on
Sleeve again
It still isn't fully
repaired from the
last time I choose
to wear it out there.
Considering going out
on A
-Date=
To the Fair
Me?!
actually going
somewhere
Instead of
locking down
within 4 walls
blowing thick
clouds into the air
Stuck
Pipe Drunk,
eyes like
dinner plates,
Doing the 40 Yard Stare...
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InfinitePoet
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2015-10-14 02:00:18]
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Re: 40 Yard Stare
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 08:32:20 AM AEST
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Really cool!
"actually going
somewhere
Instead of
locking down
within 4 walls
blowing thick
clouds into the air"
Been there, brother. Still am, sometimes. I like this poem, and am surprised no comments.
I also like that you aren't hemmed in by 'rules' or conventions of word placement.
I'll be reading more of your shares.
Way to go,
Invierno |
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Re: 40 Yard Stare
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by ming on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 09:26:48 AM AEST
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Fav line, 'isnt fully repaired from the last time I choose to wear it out there.' I can relate.
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Re: 40 Yard Stare
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Friday, 16th October 2015 @ 04:51:29 AM AEST
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your poem is so unique and well written.
full with life and all the problem we must over come.very well done. |
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Re: 40 Yard Stare
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th October 2015 @ 04:12:06 AM AEST
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| Stark, striking, and delivered in fine style. Yep, the old 40 yard stare. Know it well. |
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Re: 40 Yard Stare
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 08:25:19 AM AEST
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This is really interesting, because I started of reading at a slower pace because the smaller lines implied it to me, but with every line it picked up faster like a small rock turning to into a giant snowball.
I wish I knew what the 40 yard stare is... The only thing I can think is just zoning out. That I can definitely relate to. The "space cadet". |
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