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Walking Away
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 07:26:57 PM in AEST
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I'm thinking about turning back
Just to hold you and heal your heart
Missing me will be your challenge ahead
Mine is letting God provide you with love instead
I know you adore me it's very true
I have care but not a hunger for you
Our first semester is hitting hard
Especially because courtship is not in the cards
So Jane Eyre leaves Mr. Rochester
Saddened but with a wise and fulfilled heart
The Lord will me down this path and He will guide yours
And you will learn that my walking away will open loves door
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Re: Walking Away
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 15th October 2015 @ 04:47:53 AM AEST
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| It's sad, but this has strength in looking towards the future, which is always needed in regards to separating. You've written quite well the idea that is being expressed. I wish the best for both of you. |
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Re: Walking Away
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 15th October 2015 @ 08:29:21 PM AEST
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A beautiful. mature, wise and compassionate missive.
Well done.
Invierno |
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