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Open eyes still bleed
Contributed by
dilapidivination
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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With sacred open eyes i envision
a transformation yet incomplete
the stasis of your stoicism
eats through any remaining compassion
hypocrite, i have no time left
it's after ten and i'm starving
i refuse to imbibe your holy water
tainted with the blood of ancestry
a long line of insecurity and hatred
descended to your caustic fear
my vampiric sight was a gift
of such triviality and guilt
your god lies, feeding condescension
your exposed underbelly is fated to burst
i hear with these sharpened senses
the voices calling for your severance
yet you choose to blatantly ignore
the humble power Saturn has bestowed
instead you cower under your justification
white with horror under the truth
escape this prison or die alone
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Re: Open eyes still bleed
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:38:04 AM AEST
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| your writing is full of "big word" imagery... i love it... excellent... blessings |
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